Despair of the Shattering Shield

No geral é boa eu gostei ainda mais pra um escritor novato, foca no desenvolvimento da história que vai dar bom, os personagens também eu só um cara que gosto muito de diálogos e lutas mais demoradas e capítulos longo, descreva o visual de seus personagens e idade deles também,  fiquei meio confuso nisso não sei se é a tradução ou oq, mas eu gostei bastante da obra botei fé e vou continuar a ler 😁👍

It starts out strong. Glory to the Undead!

"Come here now Carl!" he grabbed my hand and pull me to some place.

Buzz ~

Shirou appeared this time from above.

Storyis good so farhope itgeos on for a while

Aria didn't care about Terrell and started to write on the parchment.

It was around 1 pm when she had woken up after a long night of drinking it was the one year anniversary of the day she should have gotten married but here she was alone and single with a splitting headache she needed some Advil so she rose to go to the kitchen to get some and some water. She padded into the kitchen regretting the past 24 hours as she remembered last night she felt like how she had spent her life in the last year had proved to herself that she was a mess with Sam after all she had loved him with all of her heart but he went and cheated on the wedding day with her best friend.